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illusions of heaven and hell by davespertine illusions of heaven and hell by davespertine
am i outside looking in
am i inside looking out
i look up to the window
down to the floor
i see the light
through the darkness
and think that i am found
when i am lost
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student
I like it, and I think that the shadow that looks like a cut-off cross is a mirage but I love that, too. The poem i the description is wonderfully made!
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davespertine Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
thank you
curiosity is a twisted thing
the magic of the unknown
is spoiled by explanation
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student
I think I'm in love.
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student
Can I use that in a future poem?
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davespertine Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
i.e.
either reword it or quote it

some people place too much value on words
it is debatable whether we are her to make money
or to inspire others
... most probably some other reason
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davespertine Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
some people reference their inspiration, some don't
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student
Some people are good and have bad things happen to them
Most people are bad and have good things happen to them

I believe that I am neither
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davespertine Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
either:
sun is good
rain is bad
or there is no good and bad
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student
The way you say things sort of reminds me of Yoda, except better.
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